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The sun goes down, the stars come out,
And all that counts, is here and now,
My universe, will never be the same,
I'm glad you came...



Sasuke ran in high speed towards his old hometown Konoha.
The 1st reason why he came back was the next incoming Great Ninja War and the 2nd was his old friend [Name]. Actually, you were the 1st reason but who cared.
You had always been a sick child, caught diseases easily and missed many days at school because you needed to stay at home so you wouldn’t spread any of it.
But you still managed to be a great ninja, you didn’t let your sickness take control of your life, fought and did your missions like everyone else.
You had a strong will and everyone knew that, so did Sasuke. One of the things he admired about you.
Not that he would ever tell you.
He would just sneak into your house and then go again. The raven haired didn’t want anyone to see him yet.

You were an exception of course.


You cast a spell on me, spell on me,
You hit me like the sky fell on me, fell on me,
And I decided you look well on me, well on me,
So let’s go somewhere no one else can see you and me



He gave a grunt.
Sasuke always had a soft spot for you since you two were young.
Was it maybe because you had always looked so fragile and breakable when you were sick? Which was, like mentioned before, very often.
Or the fact that you stood by his side even though he had told you that he didn’t need anyone after his whole family was killed by his brother?
He didn’t know it.
The only thing that mattered to him was to give you a visit now, like he had promised you back then as he left Konoha.

”So, you’re finally leaving, huh?”
Sasuke gave a nod there as he stood there with the back facing his old childhood friend
“Take care of yourself.”
“Will do…”, he replied as if he wasn’t really caring and stood still at his spot like frozen.
“Promise me you give me a visit someday, yeah?”
“Hn… I promise, [Name]. Goodbye.”


And Sasuke was someone who usually hold his promises no matter what, even if he didn’t look like it.


Turn the lights out now,
Now I'll take you by the hand,
Hand you another drink, drink it if you can,
Can you spend a little time,
Time is slipping away,
Away from us so stay,
Stay with me I can make,
make you glad you came



Finally, the young Uchiha reached the gates of Konoha but he wasn’t that stupid.
Walking casually through the gates would cause people to notice him and Sasuke didn’t like attention nor did he like other people.
So he walked up the stone walls of the hidden leaf village and, lucky him the sun was already setting, jumped onto a random roof.
The onyx eyed male stood still as he scanned the area around him to find the - to him - familiar household.
After a short while he found it and started to move again.
Jumping from roof to roof, he came closer to his destination.
The air turned slowly colder and colder, since the sun was taking its leave, and brushed through his raven black hair as he speed-jumped over the town.

It didn’t take him long and he had reached the house, your house to be exact.


The sun goes down, the stars come out,
And all that counts, is here and now
My universe, will never be the same, I'm glad you came
I'm glad you came

You cast a spell on me, spell on me,
You hit me like the sky fell on me, fell on me,
And I decided you look well on me, well on me,
So let’s go somewhere no one else can see you and me



So he entered through the back by using the spare key that you always had hidden in your secret spot that only you and he knew.
Shutting the door softly behind him, he walked through the dark kitchen into the also dark living room.
Sasuke looked around, not daring to turn the lights on.
You never know, right?
As his eyes had adjusted to the darkness he was about to check up your room, but something caught his attention.
It was barely noticeable but he saw it anyway; a piece of paper was lying neatly folded on the table in front of the couch.

So the Uchiha picked it up and needed now to turn on the light, if he wanted it or not.
As he read the context, he furrowed his brow even more than it already was but he gave a sigh.
The letter told him that you were probably in the hospital in your standard room 281.
A part of him had already known it before this letter, the other part was a bit worried.
Sasuke had hoped that you would get better after those years but it looked like the opposite happened.
He turned out the lights and slipped the note into his ninja pocket, where he usual had his regular shuriken.
The young male left your house again, not before locking the back door again, and made his way to the Konoha hospital, where he had spent some nights back then too.


Turn the lights out now,
Now I'll take you by the hand,
Hand you another drink, drink it if you can,
Can you spend a little time,
Time is slipping away,
Away from us so stay,
Stay with me I can make, make you glad you came



Lucky that his memory was not playing tricks on him because he found the hospital very quick.
The sun was already gone, the dark sky was hovering over the village with stars gracing the night and shinning down in a beautiful way.
It also didn’t take him long to locate you, seeing that your window was open like always – Sasuke could just give a Tch at your carelessness – he hopped down from the tree directly into your also dark room, beside the small lamp that was standing on your nightstand, and tried not to make a sound.
He landed softly on the ground and looked around in the room, the moon light spent him enough light to see the most important things.

It was a regular room in the Konoha hospital, beside the fact that it’s was technically yours because you were so often here that they gave you always the same room, some flowers here and there and some Get better soon presents there and here. Even some plush animals had found their way into your room.
Then he saw you sleeping peacefully in your bed.
You looked paler than ever, your breath was so unnoticeable that he thought for a moment, that you were dead.
You had lost a lot of weight too.

Your now for sure thin fingers clutched onto something.
Softly he took it out of your grip, hoping that you wouldn’t wake up, and looked at it.
His onyx eyes widened in shock.
It was a picture of you two as you both had passed school, you were smiling a goofy smile beside him while he just stood there with crossed arms with a tiny smirk on his lips, both of your headbands were proudly placed on your foreheads.

You had never given up hope on him and he thanked you silently for it.


The sun goes down, the stars come out,
And all that counts, is here and now,
My universe, will never be the same-



Sasuke planted his butt on the chair to the right of your bed and starred at your sleeping face.
Your eyes were closed in a soft way and your mouth was slightly open, your breath so silent and unheard.
Without thinking, he reached out and brushed a few strands of your [h/c] out of your face gently and took your hand as mellow as he could into his.
He kind of knew that you would wake up soon, he felt it.
You stirred slightly in your sleep, feeling the sudden touch of another person on your hand.
Blinking with your eyes a few times, you finally woke up and looked to your left with a blurry vision, then to your right.
You did this a few times until your sight was clear again and saw your best friend beside you with his usual stoic face, which always took over a soft glint when he saw you.
Sasuke gave a small, barrly noticeable smile.
“Hey…”, he just said awkwardly and caused you to laugh hoarsely, which showed that you hadn’t used your voice for some time.
He couldn’t help but grin a bit at your sight. At least he was good at making you laugh, he always had been.
You mouthed a Hi back and smiled brightly at him. Even if your face looked worn out you looked still happy to him.
Maybe he was the reason?
“I don’t have anything for you…”, he mumbled, suddenly feeling stupid to visit a fatally ill person without any presents.
You just shook your head, telling him that it was okay.
“But I didn’t break my promise”, he added smiling uncharacteristically in an apologising way and caressed the back of your hand with his thumb.
You just grinned brightly at him and coughed a few times, gripped onto his hand as you whispered with a hoarse voice:




“I'm glad you came.”
Again a KatelinLikesFeenie production.
I’m way too much into Naruto again, I swear.
And you should’ve noticed my love for Sasuke by now xDD

AND HOLEE SHEET I LUV THIS SONG! //shot

I got this idea while taking a bath ((WHEN DO I NOT GET AN IDEA WHIEL TAKIN A BAHT LIEK SRSLY)) and yeah, I was listening to that song during my be-a-whale-in-a-bathtub-time non stop :XD:
And yeah, it’s the Punk goes Pop version ((Gotta luv Punk goes Pop :la:)) from We came as Romans. New fav band I swear

Anyway, I hope you liked it!



PICTURE ((NOT MINE!!)) FOUND HERE => touch.pixiv.net/member_illust.…

SONG => Glad you came | We came as Romans



Story/ Plot © KatelinLikesFeenie

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tylrael Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
*speechless from the amazingness*
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attackontitanslevi Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014
That freaking ending doeeeee GENIUS
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Aphy-Taffy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
:iconfeelsplz:
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888DTKiddo888 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're an incredible writer! This literally brought me to tears!
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JKitty125 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
So sweet *^* and nice choice of song ;D lol
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Feeniecchi Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~
Hahah, I adore that song xD
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HatakeNeko Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
Amazing :)
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Feeniecchi Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks c:
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HatakeNeko Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Writer
you're welcome ^_^
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Soul-Skaterz Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That ending though... GENIUS
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